dude you gotta stop rhyming the same words over and over again, thats not good. always a no no it makes ya verse come off mad newbish

and yeaaa I seen alot of breathe verses

this wasnt too bad

"Its a real bad look, I'm get'n sick of these wack niggas
I aint goin out like ya'll, I'm not a regular rap nigga
Catch slugs to ya body if you run'n ya lips
Rob ya bitch 'n' have my whole crew run in her lips
I''m really back nigga, i spit that crack nigga
Get a fuck'n clue, unless you wanna get clapped nigga"

^best lines. But I hate that you rhymed nigga and lips so much

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