CONCEPT IS GENIUS, IT'S CREATIVE & UNIQUE...I DON'T KNOW WHY CATS IS SLEEPIN ON THIS THREAD. STORY LINE STAYED ON TRACK THE WHOLE TIME...
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Originally Posted by David Lama
theres no repenting plan, I’m deceiving humanity
play mind tricks on them till their reaching insanity
completing my fantasy.. as I make them say my name
for everything, “JESUS JESUS” while in their brains I reign
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HOT, NICE TRANSITION INTO THE NEXT LINE....
THERE WAS A COUPLE CORNY LINES THROWN IN WHERE ITS CLEAR YOU WAS LOOKING FOR ANOTHER MULTI TO THROW IN SUCH AS...
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Originally Posted by David Lama
nevermind, I need to first know why this urge to write stuff?
don’t lie schmuck, remember I know everything. alright!! FUCK!!
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BUT THEN AGAIN ITS EXCEPTABLE WHEN YOUR TACKLING A CHALLENGING SUBJECT & THE FLOW WAS AS LONG AS IT WAS, SO THERES GONNA BE A COUPLE THROWAWAY LINES ADDED IN TO SPACE THE VERSE OUT... DOPE SHIT THOUGH.