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Old 05-20-06, 08:23 PM   #13
Paranoid
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you have a good voice for a female artist. But you need to deliver your voice differently, give it some more emotion and shit. the flow was up and down, but for the most part it was good.

2nd cat was pretty good, his flow was solid through out and the one cat that dubbed it was dope. nice voice combinations, just a overall good verse.

3rd cats flow was off, just a few lines felt good and fitted the snare right. delivery needs more work, could be said better as well. but it's decent.

overall good track, keep it up.

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