Listening...your quality is much better, your voice is still robotic and yo style is robotic but its still decent...ure flow is okay..you need to add more emotion and delivery...there was one line i cud feel the emotion when u fluctuated the way u said something..but most of it was like.."dah dah dah dah" all the same thing = boring and hard to listen too..but if u change the way u talk on sum words itll be interesting...1
can u rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...268#post2747268