This was decent. I like the creativity behind this verse, it was very well thoughtful. You seem to be forcing, here and there, in your rhymes. The imaginary was good, very well portrait. The emotion I could feel between the 2 characters in your verse. The Transition though was kinda, iffy, but it was cool. The vocabulary was good. This was a very wel interesting piece, the only thing that caught my attention was your creativity/ concept and the way you apporached the Topic, very Nice.

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