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Old 05-21-06, 12:46 PM   #4
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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beat is pretty cool
alot of cool lines pretty good verse lyrically your definately improving with your lisp not nearly as noticable as it has been on other tracks
emotion is cool
flow was cool
was there a hook?????
sensers flwo is on point is pretty cool voice is cool
with your delivery you sound like youre trying to be like triple n in my opinion lol
lyrics were cool quality was good better than jaes
overall track is most def downloadable

only complaint would be i cnat hear some of jaes verse because the beat overpowers him in parts
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