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Originally Posted by R-Jae
This Was Nice Fam, Multies Like Crazy But It Actually Made Sence.. Nice Ish.. but IMO you over use Multies, this is good for text but your flow was off due to words that are mainly found in a thesaurus...
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'PRECIATE THE FEED, BUT NAW OBVIOUSLY WHEN YOU READ IT YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO DETECT THE FLOW IF YOU PAUSE WERE YOUR NOT SUPPOST TO PAUSE OR IF YOU SAY IT TO FAST OR SLOW YOU KNOW WHAT IM SAYIN? IF YOU READIN SOME EM OR JAY LYRICS AND SOMETHIN DOESNT SEEM LIKE IT FLOWS RIGHT YOU KNOW YOU'D JUST HAVE TO HEAR IT TO GET IT, BECAUSE THEY PROFESSIONAL..SO AM I, I DONT LET NOTTIN SLIP OR MUMBLE ANYTHING TO SQUEEZE IT INTO A BAR, FEEL ME...& THE VOCAB WASNT THAT BIG TO ME, I AINT HAVE TO PULL OUT THE DICTIONARY OR ANYTHING, I KNEW WHAT I WAS TALKIN BOUT.
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