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Showin Much Respect For Droppin Feed On My Shit, At First Glance This Piece Is Just Aight...but If You Really Analyze It The Talent Shows, It Took Creativity To Strech The Subject Out And Make It As Long As It Is, Most Of The Time One Subject Dragged Out Would Get Boring And Played Out As It Goes On But You Made It Work. Only Thing I Can Nit Pick At Is You Rhymed "gold, Told, & Unfold" Alot. Still A Nice Joint Though.
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