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Old 05-25-06, 02:01 AM   #10
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N.Tav had flow and punches with mad diversity and mu;tie keyed phrases that was cool

They NEVER knew you now you coming back acting retarded
But shit even when you was active, you was actively garbage

^^This was a nice opener, hi em GOOD!
best line though was this..

Dont get no bright ideas T, I'll leave a dent where you think
And you'll see ' Bully on the Rocks ' like I invented a drink

^^Hit witha punch and a mix of multie creativity!.


Troop.
Your flow was ok but it seemed like you were going to far into some kind of E-Net ghetto flow hood nigga fo real.


Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle

^^ Funny shit mayne real creative too but didnt hit well.
that was the only worth while punch you threw...the rest you threw in were kinda plaid or word'd bad. nothing else man real got my attention.

V/ Tav for more consistancy and punches that connected well!
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