Voted For: Raw King
Raw King:
now where's ur crown at?...bitch...bark and I'll let the dogs get u....
U uncle Fester ass nigga....Zig Zag should've mopped the floor wit u....
4/10 - OK Opener.
U weak in a battle....not as Raw as the competition....
Trigger town wanted u gone...shit...even u signed the petitions...
6/10 - Good Punch.
so quit crying...u mad cuz u aint a vet...
u been here since 04'....god damn...u still haven't elevated yet....
4/10 - OK.
Ur new name is Peasants...ask strobe to make it permanent...
u been here for ever....how many times have I seen YOU in the Tournaments?
4/10 - OK.
u been here too long to not have achieved a thing...
nobody knows who u are?...yeah right...nigga aint u the burger King?...
4/10 - OK.
fuck it...u don't have a ghostwriter thats been against the south....
so who's feeding u material? nah...I dont mean the dicks in ur mouth...
2/10 - NO.
u a bitch....I can tell by the man boobs on the pics...
U told me to elevate...but fuck...u aint done none of that since...
4/10 - OK.
so spit ur wak verse and let me body u...u fucking adolescent...
u underaged wit no skillz...thats why crews don't acknowledge ur presence...
4/10 - OK Closer.
28/80=35%
You had an ok verse, nothing that great. Used some OK's punchlines and personals. You had one good one in there.
.Theory.:
Kids wack I got 954 ways o nothin but pure rawproof.
Rawkings couldn't beat me if he collabed with 5 dudes.
4/10 - OK Opener.
and yea you stackin bodies in the south poundin em.
............... but to bad its only with Gay men!
4/10 - OK.
gimme 5 minutes and Ill own you with a short 10.
........whats up with you takin your shirts off posein?
3/10 - Meh.
dude your ulgy just look and see how big your nose is!
Do i really Need I diss you on your e-thug Fez pics?
2/10 - Bad.
you couldn't kick a decent punch if your life pended it!!
...............Ill leave your wig split with sick punches.
couldn't murk anyone kid even if your personals packed crunches.
4/10 - Good closer.
17/50 = 34%
You had a iight verse, nothing that special either tho. OK flow some OK punchlines nothing that stood out to me.
OVERALL: I give this vote to Raw for his one line that I was feeling. It was the only really good line in this battle. He did come with more lines which gave him the advantage. But he just flowed better and I feel he wanted this more then kings. Kings your lines were iight, it flowed well they were just not hitten him hard enough.
Vote - RAW
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