Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.
lol

^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
pretty coo
Kid, I’ll rattle ya brains. . and leave ya with internal bleedin’
And have you so fucking lost – you’ll be the main star in the next season.
kinda played
I’m bringing a new theme to this beatin’. . going beyond old school, cock
You can just call me caveman, the way my club’ll be bashing D-Rock.
ok
I’ll school you ho, my lines pack double meaning. . so sit and take notes, G
Cuz after this battle, in reference to you. . there’ll be no votes to C
ok

Fuck it yo,
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
feelin it
You can’t match up to me. . I’ll bitch slap you left and right
Causing this battle to be a shut-out. .
. . like ya moms does to you every night!
ehh
I got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!
lol, made me laugh

ya, this verse was aight. your wording is pretty off and on, but when it's on you can really tell a difference in the punches. i liked a few lines, the rest weren't really great, but i liked the mocking of his style shit, that was pretty funny. aight verse, definitely not bad, but not quite great.

vs.

Somebody need to get Nick Fletcher up off my ass
.....................Cuz his verse aint a verse
It more in the style of a history class
nah
Damn...you sad nick but the emotions dont move me
I would hope someone remembered my old alias
But postin em in da same post is makin ya look like a groupie
stretched lines here playa, ok punch
And why you keep poppin about how nigga is wack
Like you really doing alot more than the rest
Dont make bring the real reality back
By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best
nah
Im Authentic while you artificial going along with the initial
Scared to try something new knowin ya creativity is very little
nah
Tell you the truth, all ya flows is straight bagage
You I damage, with flows of a savage
my rhymes take away from ya means
Making your bitch ass less than average
Underestimate lines and eatin niggas rhymes
Exspect to be digesting a knuckle sandwhich
averagne/mean shit isnt a new concept, plus 4 lines wasnt makin this smooth
With punches so hard, I'll even bring myself to my knees
Command you bitch to to lay down
And Recieve the feast of my dog meat
All my dogs hold the long heat
lol nah
So consider them a squad of range rovers
Jab Jab uppercut to ya chin
To increase the thoughts that you aint sober
Go head and takes the chin checks and get slept
Puttin you sleep faster than sweet 16 sleepovers
nah man

man, i dunno. your wording needs alot of work, wayyyy tooo wordy of lines.


vote- nick, better punches, better disses, most importantly a readable structure.

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