I beat bitches up
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Voted For: GKillaz05
*Comes 2 the Stage Late...Grabs Mic*
(JUST WANNA SAY..INTROS ARE GAY AS SHIT...i THINK SPUL WAS THE FIRST ONE i SAW DO THAT SHIT AND ITS BEEN GAY EVER SINCE)
Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif
This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs
WAK
Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks
.............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax
WAK
And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep
Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet
TERRIBLE CLOSER AND UR PUNCH WAS DELIVERY WAS ALL WRONG TRHOUGH THE WHOLE VERSE
I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me...
Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery...
KIND OF WAK BUT THE 2ND LINE PICKED IT UP...
While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic...
Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'...
i DONT KNOW ABOUT THIS ONE...I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE IT.
Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop...
kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup...
1ST LINE WAS GOOD BUT THE SECOND LINE LOOKED LIKE U RAN OUT OF WORDS TO RHYME WITH HOOP...
OVER ALL i LIKE GKILLAZ VERSE BETTER ON THIS ONE. EVEN THOUGH BOTH VERSES WERE OK AND REALLY SHORT TOO...i THINK G JUST PUT A LIL MORE EFFORT INTO HIS VERSE WITH HIS 1ST BAR...THAT REALLY WON IT FOR ME...REST OF THE VERSE WASN'T TOO GOOD ON BOTH SIDES.
V/ GKILLAZ05
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Originally Posted by Jesus Christ
Damn son.......did I write that shit?
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