Ya don’t stand half a chance. .
. .and ya record shows ya lose half the time,
Because ya style is considered half-ass. .
. .and that’s just the half that rhymes.
^ I’m mocking ya style. . you take the word stretched too far. .
Damn son, I could quote half ya verse. . and that’d just be the first bar.
^ROFL love how it goes off that first bar
I’m a fan of baseball son. . I’ll take the bat and break ure frame,
And knock you so far outta the park, you’ll be moving house again
got no props for you bro. . Chris can’t handle the verse that I show
Hell, he can’t stomach his verses and it’s that bad. .
. . he’s dropped shit 8 weeks in a row!


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Like you really doing alot more than the rest
Dont make bring the real reality back
By reminding you that you'll only be a text head at best

chris you have to work on getting some personals in your verse that hit
meaning that your opponant would read and go "ouch"
your verse is ok but their more of statements than real punchlines
it just needs some firepower

nick i read ya shit forever, u dont need feedback


v/ nick