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Old 05-26-06, 01:25 PM   #22
Mad Dog
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Originally Posted by Chief
aight the intro is coo', who made this beat?

Verse 1: Accent is horrible and boring. Flow is good, quality ain't that good 'cause it goes out and comes back in. Feeling the seesore line. okay verse.

Chrous: Not feeling it.

Verse 2: Same as verse 1 really. Better lyrical content though.

Chrous: Same as above.

Verse 3: Quality is better than errything so far. Flow is good, emotion is felt. Lyrics are good. Work on ya delivery though, most lines are like "dudududududududddduuuu"...good verse though

Chrous: Really not feeling it.

6/10


cheers feed duly noted and RTF will occour shortly
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