pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: GKillaz05
GK: all lines flowed nice, but nothin really too special... the net like a hoop line was my favorite....
Troop: i'm guessin that it flows, but can't really tell cuzz of the structure and spelling i only got that GK was into hockey or somethin, which would've been kool if your lines were hotter... best line was the mime spittin on wax...
overall: GK cuz he came hotter line-wise, but very mediocre with that soup line, if Troop came hotter, u would've lost it with that one...
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-Konchance
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