needs a better title...think JAY Z


beat is slick-like

Vocals are muffled...need better mixing or a new mic


flow is kinda choppy, but your lyrics aren't bad


some lines a tad contrived...But, not terrible...


delivery is a tad monotonous...can tell you're reading in spots

I'd suggest practicing your flow more before you record so that it'll flow more naturally.


decent drop


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