RobKilla
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IP:
Kinda rude how I Killed em, leave this soldier peeved
So Welcome Back Troops! No wait.... ..^their still overseas
What you expected, warm hugs? these kicks stick to your ribs now
He'll hit the Bricks fast enough to knock Redmans crib down
And Happy Birthday, but dont post none of those rhyme lines, fool
Or I' ma give this 20/20....... like Prime Time News
i didnt get that bully on the rocks line... i'd say this battle prolly wasnt hot's best shit but we got some decent wordplay out oof it. best linie to me was the redman line. haha lol brick city in this bitch *i dont think some ppl got the wordplay but w/e*
i JUST got the 20/20 line upon my 2nd time reading this battle, good shit. overall, i see the effort put it and im a fan of lyrics and wordplay so i'll say this was a good verse. not ur best, but good.'
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Look faggot you talkin bout crippin.. but bitch you dont Do Pistols
"Hot" Spitss "Shhh" and Hes a Vet? Lol Yea ok and so was DoLittle
You dont run Shit your a Dick Ridein addict so 2 me your a Fiend Don
You from "New Jersey" aint u...So basically u Fold when the Heat's On
honestly, i expected a bit more from troop. he started off good with some original delivery, but then his verse kinda drifted back to that like 04 rapverse type shit with simple similies as punchesc like the "fucked and burned" line... i've seen this concept before.... delivery and all. some parts of ur battle show elevation but other parts dont, so i'll say just be more consistant witht the dope shyt and you'll come out on top but i have to say this one goes to hot basically for more quotables... both verses were decent and the quoteables were all about equally raw... so i hadda just choose who had more quoteables which is Hotshh...
V/ N Tavarez
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