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Old 05-28-06, 03:42 PM   #2
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1st verse ... beat is drownin ya voice..had some nice lines..flow fell off at times..nd the delivery was koo..should raise tha vol on tha vocals tho..

hook was ok i guess for tha beat..cant really understand tha lyrics tho..should fix tha quality

2nd verse..flow was koo till u switched up nd started spittin fast..flow kina fell off there..but eventually tha flow came back..lyrics was koo..delivery was pretty much there..again tha quality makes it hard ta understand

3rd verse..first niggas flow was ok..could hear u takin breaths in between bars..should spit a bar till u lose yo breath nd start a new track layer thing nd pick up where u left off 2nd nigga sound like u was dissin somebody..wasnt really on tha topic..but tha flow was str8..lyrics is ok..overall nice track..quality woulda made it better..
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