because stating a point that is against the other point, is technically arguing..


but anyways.




I liked it.
some deep lines.

"I gave a boy ..words fit for a man ..
kissed his hand and told him...
I want to write you beautiful poetry so you'll never forget how special u r 2 me,
he didn't understand my words bypass my heart and pour from my soul.."

The hateful appreciation you sort of portray in what you write really intrigues me in some parts of your pieces. Good use of repatition to start of new stanzas, and all around nice work.

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