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The Alien Toung
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eww @ beat @ 1st...eww @ real beat...you come in w a lil to much energy..work into it a bit...a few "uhh's and yeah's" maybe...your bars r to long, made ur flow off a lot..delevery is not here cuz ur rushing...emotion is good though...
keep workin @ it...
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Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"
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Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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