Voted For: Valor

Valor:
kid your wack, you won't be able to kill me
on rv your not a vet...
your a never was, and also a never will be
5/10 - Good Opener.
im like a sick dog back in the nineteen eighties
my punches rip through you like a bad case of rabies
3/10 - Meh.
can't take me, after a week you'll have more losses than posts
metaphores attack and scareing you like you just seen a ghost
3/10 - Nah.

im straight topical and ill still destroy your little week mind
so shocked on my lines your panicking trying to seek more time.
4/10 - OK.
you can't hack this, your wet behind the ears, needing more practice
aim'ing vets begging 'ghosts writers'' saying can i have this
5/10 - Good Punch.
i'll torch and burn you, lighting you up like a lighter
im on fire...
before you can start ill take the win, having you banned as a biter
5/10 - Good Closer.
25/60=42%

YOu had a pretty good verse, it flowed well and had some good punches and personals in there.



Epos:
Your finished in a moments time,
Remix your face more than a Pac rhyme that ya cop online
3/10 - Weak Opener.
The truth hurts, but there just no fun in shaming you,
Rapverse is dead and everyone is blaming you
5/10 - OK Punch.
My direct dialect will leave this so called vet disconnected,
I drop so hard on the screen guaranteed to leave your PC infected,
4/10 - Good Rhymes.
You beat’n me? Even Miss Cleo predicts me the winner
I’ll leave this whicked one with more shells then kraft dinner,
4/10 - OK.
So go ahead and fill your whole verse with shit that you’ll do to me,
Dude’s live’n in make-believe it’s why his crew includes Santa and the tooth fairy
4/10 - OK Closer.
20/50=40%

Your verse was pretty decent, it flowed pretty good and used good rhymes. Your punches just wernt hitten as hard.



OVERALL: This was a really close battle, I think V got this becuz he had one extra line that helped out it verse and made it more stronger. E you need to work on more creative punches your rhymes were good just punches wernt that hard and do the MAX amount of lines you can in a battle.


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