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Old 05-30-06, 05:52 PM   #5
TonyTone
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verse 1- was alright nothin special. a few good lines here n there though. delivery was ok, you need some kinda swagger though

hook was str8, once again nothin special. a lil catchy though

verse2- dunno why but i dont like ya voice. that twista shit was just gay it like didnt seem natural n came in completely randomly w/ the transition. iunno, just ok

verse 3- nah, ya flow's kinda choppy. need some more confidence or somethin in ya delivery. lyrics were decent

eh, ok track
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