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Old 05-30-06, 08:01 PM   #21
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Originally Posted by JC REAL
this was a nice peice it ryme good it had nice flow and structure was tight

on the negitive side u coulda had better rymes and punches but the ones u had were great........

id give u a 7 outta 10


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