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New to RV
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IP:
ahh nice piece friend...
flow was pretty nice
lines were even length
structure was easy to understand
your emotion was pretty dam nice..
pleasant and kept my interest...
favorite part:
Upon there departure I see my dying grandfather abeyant in a chair
... Undoubtedly unaware of me gazing seemingly without care ...
I see it again, as I've seen before, that puzzle labeled on the table ...
... One look before I go out again to persue my nightly technique ...
^nice....feelin this...kinda clicked imo
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...MethoÐiKaL™
...Vanguard....Its In Ya Mouth Beeyotch...
...dropping heads left and right like ambidextrous guillotine workers...
Quote:
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Originally Posted by Rhyme of Reason
...I See Jesus Walk On The Blood Of Our Ancestors...
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Immaculate
[im • mac • u • late] adj.
1 : having no stain or blemish
2 : containing no flaw or error
.........spotlessly clean.......... |