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Old 05-31-06, 04:33 PM   #13
PrahJect
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Listenin' beat is hot lovin the sample in the beginin, drum pattern is hot and the scratches in there are hot..I like how you come in...flow is real dope I like it, delivery is nice your normal mulits are hot however I think your emotion is a lil lackin here..this is a personal jawn so if u went a lil more emotion with more fluctuations but it gets much better in the 2nd verse..I like how u talked/rhymed in the hook..emotion is much better on 2nd verse you can really feel it its a 10/10 in the 2nd verse...lyrics are koo too...nice fo a love joint this was a 9.6/10..only that emotion factor in first verse thats it..1
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