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Old 06-02-06, 05:07 PM   #14
Butler
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i thought this 1 was kinda 1sided. pretty much tim didnt really have anythnig at all.. not cuz he didnt hav some concepts, but more becuz he didnt hav a fluent verse.. or, coherent. it was goin allover at points, ...just write like ud talk. feel me?

wickeds was alittle more polished. had better concepts. the opener was pretty decent.

v wicked
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