I have to agree... I saw some punches but they were weak and shit. The structure you used was horrid, and the fact that you had to explain so much and that you did it between bars is an excuse in itself for me to slap you. The style was newbish, some of the punches were just too plain and shitty... they need better wording and what decent parts you had in your verse had to be found like a needle in a haystack. Troop on the other hand had a couple of decent punches, personals were there although they could be better. But, at least he had a style that was readable and did not have to explain all his shit.. Overall he had a better verse and so he gets the win.

V/ - TROOP

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