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Old 06-03-06, 05:30 AM   #10
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nice well ok ima start off like this.


King you came off feeding?!...THATS NEVER GOOD MAN...never feed off of a persons verse it kinda makes you look weak...some lines were more on for audio RAW...so i say elevate and really make your lines more creative and hit harder rather than feeding off..


MON. your first drop SUCKED but your real verse was sdecent at least your punches came on harder and the personals werent too played like before and made sense.

V// Mon for coming stronger with consistancy and punches
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