i know i’m the truth. you know it as well so don’t lie hoe
cuz if your Yung..
.. that gives me another reason to want to die old
i’m eatin you slow. when i write i laugh at this nerds aggression/
make you ahead of the line for death – only time theres a 1st Impression
everytime Yung writin a verse voters is thinking the dude is borin
no fans at all – fact is his family tree isn’t even rootin for em

all very nice lines. concepts were good and some well wording in there.

vs.

rush wins battles cuz of help. its kinda sad, im embarrass for u ho.
cuz not only did he write for u, but ya ass still lost 4 weeks in a row.
u a poor fat kid. ya on here tryna act proper, kid thats just no right.
wheneva u say 'I practially live on RV' we no u aint talkin bout this site.

And that's how it do.

Your second line woulda been good, but .. bar wordplay is played. Just.. like that.

My vote will go to Rush Lingo for more quotables.

Yung, ya styles cool but ya need better concepts.

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