The Alien Toung
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beats ok....
1st...need to fix ur quality...noise reduct bro...hooks nice tho...pops n shit, watch your lvls...up ur delevery and emotion......maybe rethink the amount of sylabels used...not enough IMO and kinda fucks up flow...
2nd verse..flow starts nice...emotion is lackluster though...deep lyrics though..I feel ya here man...
can hear the emotion in ur writing but..not in ur voice man..get more comfortable on the mic
keep it up though bro..
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