Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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ok so first things first
wipe out every single bit of text-looking thing you see from this piece
that includes the text brushing in the top left
that DESTROYS what this piece could be
the text at the bottom is just fat and extremely un-necessary
why not put some bogus track listings or something down there instead? it would look a HELL of a lot nicer
the whole "werds" part is kind of layed out nice
but the stock gradient on it makes it look like you made it in kid-pix
either take that off, make your own, or place a low opacity image over it
however
whether you meant to do this or not i absolutely love the stock/psd combination
the angles look almost perfect together, if you matched up the colors and qualities nicely it would really look like he was standing there, which is pretty hard to pull off
hopefully that shit helps you
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