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Old 06-05-06, 10:12 PM   #14
Ion W. Yuu
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You ain’t on my level, and its your wackness that’s the cause
I mean, I lost twice last week bro. .
. .and still came out with a better record than yours.
You a hardcore battler, well I’m a pool player mate
But I don’t need to be given a cue, to fucking sink the number 8
Rush is all gung-ho, but the truth is he won’t do well
‘Coz I could give him a database of personals. .
. .and you’d still never see him Excel!
Rush, your verses are wack. . but its not your fault as such
‘Coz how can you expect to spit fire – when vote-wise you CO2 much.
This battle’ll prolly be a let down. . I should tell voters so they all know
That you droppin’ shit is so common. .
. . we might see a few bitch moves also!

Work on ur wording, ur concepts are topnotch but then ur wording screws it all up

vs

^really? i find that false because truthfully i bomb vets
if i suck so bad..
that would explain why last week YOU stole MY concept
this a easy task. It’s nothing cuz I run past geeks
yeah, you got skill..
but what happened when out of THREE you won ONE last week?
'm like baseball with my lines. everything he Red, Sox this kid
it's like defeating NY b-ball teams.. cuz i'm droppin Knicks
face it i'm slayin ya rhymes, ya washed up like hangin with tides
when it comes to the winner, no one will PicNic.. cuz my reign is outside

a verse full of played name play? some was dope and some was horrific. hes prolly had all the nameplay possible on his name pulled on him, so if ur gonna use it, be creative.

V// Nick, Good Battle Both
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