The beat's real light. I personally don't like, sounds liek it was made by a producer that doesn't rap so wouldn't know what a rapper would look for. The hook, well the lyrics were on point, but it sounds like you need a pop filter like woah. lyrics were on but damn your recording habits need some grooming and some EQing in a big way.

some places your flow is too slow like you're trying to let it linger too long for you to keep it on flow, then other places you stuff too many syls into one bar.

ok song, but I don't like the beat for a rap track and the recording qual is in need. the lyrics were on point

real talk as always. 1

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