vocals during the intro sounded a tad compressed...

beat is alright...kinda of hackneyed


this concept has been done 100000000000000 x before...and I just don't hear anything unique during the first minute of this track

flows are str8 tho

nothing major lyric-wise


Hook...fits the track, but the lyrics are a bit corny..."want u in my lap"...ehhh...well, if this track didn't have such a "serious" tone to it, that'd work...But, it sounds like you're conflicted in what you want from this chick...You want a hoe and a housewife?

the birds in the background are blowin me...


I wasn't really feelin this.

sorry fellas


But, the flows and delivery were good.

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