i was really feelin this piece, flow was on point and u had multies to up it as well
"We’re not perfect, but we fit so perfectly" Nice pun
"But she knows we ended the book with an unfinished story" Liked the metaphor.
i liked the ended where you made the comparison to mountains flattenin and mice chasen cats instead, it helped stress the emotion you had.
oh btw "And if I know at all who you are, I haven’t gone too far" i wasnt too sure what that meant; that lines makes it sound like u haven't met that person yet, care to explain?
aye overall good piece and a nice drop

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