Originally Posted by Shear Kaughn

aight here we gooo...yo!!

alright....if i was you, i'd redo the hook....like tighten it up or something......
you got good flow...the beat is cool i reckon..i like it....not to hype not ot soft and ucky
it sounds like you got good lyrics..but i can't make out what they are really....mixing could help a tad bit.....check out some of the tutorials or cook up your own settings

overall it was a cool track..just some minor things need to be looked at, includign the hook and some better mixing..

keep spitting...