Ya mom massages my nuts
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wow...ya voice comin right in, damn almost aint recognize it was u..been so long since I listened to you...ok intro was unnecessary an sounded exceedingly wack..shoulda jus let beat play....riding the snares a lil too abrupt...not liking how ya rhyme words is ending so abruptly, sounds like u wrote this to a slower beat then switched beats...ya delivery is better than I remember...but still sorely lacks any personality...it fluctuates but it doesn't come across right..cant really elaborate...hook was ah'ight again it was a unnecessary plug an didn't really fit wit the verses...lmao@ u mentioning me...anyways..lyrically you have the idea but execute it poorly...u jus bluntantly say shit...like instead u dissing apexx u tell a story about him...examples: "u think JFK was shot by elvis u dumb as shit?" HOW IS THAT A DISS? a difference of opinion is a punchline? " job u got none?" again wheres the punch? "ya flow kept stalling like teamone"...first line that was even remotely insulting..."real estate, you real or fake?"<--was that a diss on his age?<--u had the setup then spit sum nonsense where a punch should be. u bluntly call him a pedofile wit no punch..."got kicked outta OYD for being wack?" are u kidding me?..where is the punch!!!?...lyrically it was u bragging wit a few "references" to apexx u never actually dissing him...it was like u put a conversation or should I say a monologue "influenced" by apexx over a beat...this would be insulting in a conversation but its wack in a diss track...stylistically u was alil stronger than pexx but lyrically u had absolutely nothing to offer...an ya intro & hook took away from the track as far as for bumpage purposes IMO. Both yall had decent to lackluster drops not wack but nothing to fret over neither. step it up...for all the shit ya toss at each other in LL I wanted MORE!
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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