[Lucky Luciano]
Look G u wouldnt Run shit if you was an Battle Enabled Cheif
This time ima "Check u in These Boards" Like ya MappleLeafs
^^meh, nothin hard hitting, attempted personal...2/5
Im statein Facts When i say ya Text and Audio Majorly Lacks
.............. i Neva Heard ya Audio..Like a Mime spittin on Wax
^^nope...not feeling at all, and you contradicted the first line of this bar by sayin his Audio lacks then sayin you never heard his audio...1/5
And Jus Like ya Hockey Team...Ima Pull a whole Series Sweep
Commenting on Ya Syrup Only Time Nebody say Canada Sweet
^^decent ending, another personal attempt...strongest bar....3/10

overall 6/15...work on mulites(multiple rhyming words in one line), similies(make your punches much more complex), both of those would make your personals stronger

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[Gkilla]
I didnt even begin and now this jerk is tryna finish me...
Get a job in a pizza shop so u can work on ya delivery...
^^nah, not feeling...pizza shop/delivery line is played...1/5
While we are on topic Troop ya skills are microscopic...
Treated him like a poopa scoopa becuz his 'drops shit'...
^^nope, again not feeling...elementary rhymes 1/5
Troop aint a soulja his group is all net like a hoop...
kids always bein' defeated, quickly heated like soup...
^^your best, but not strong...2/5

overall 4/15...you need just as much elevation as the other guy. Multies, Similies, personals...the only thing you two had was structure and flow...but meh...weak battle

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