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Old 06-07-06, 07:17 PM   #25
JPoll
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intro made me bored...

do you have a lisp, or is it just me?

gaypexx....haha, that's original...
'sarcasm'

i really agree with triple on this, and your still on his dick...

but here's your breakdown from a non oyd, for once.

flow...6/10, really boring
delivery...4 to mr lispy
lyrics...5 no quotables in my opinion, you had 0 wordplay that hit.
manaffection was the most decent line...to me.
shouldn't you get someone else to do your intro, if your saying fuckem up q...
quality...6, voice too loud
extras. 0/10

in my opinion ppexx got you.

seems he's in a different league than you.
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