Voted For: rellik

lol...tight verse here...

he had a lot of humor,punches kept on coming harder and hader...irony was also applyed...he also had some multiz..which aided him to having a nice flow...yah i was madly feeling your metaz and the vocab: simple but mixed with your mets they turned out nu and tight..yeah concepts were clare and structure was gd too...you had a decent verse and unlike ur opponent...he didnt have punches to me...

yo cruz...you shudnt space ur bars cos it cuts off your flow...and in a battle dawg i guess you are to 'diss' to 'kill' ...not spit out things u prolly wud neva get hold of...you just make me imply that you are forming(i.e pretending) which to us all on rv means being a kid...a stupid one...and dont fill in so much words in a bar/line cos if it wasnt for xperience to me ur whole verse wudnt have had not even a rhymed line...you really shud learn from rellik...no hate just advicing you!


..wun...

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