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Old 06-08-06, 05:53 PM   #15
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Voted For: TEK-NIK

nice....

teknik had more slamming punches...his verse had a better flow and it was slightly better in structure...i liked the whole entertainment on there...most lines got me laffing u know...and concept was clare...tho ur opponent beat u on imagery and vocab...but unlike him u were much more at point with dissing him...u hit much more harder...

err tino...ur verse was gd too but just didnt have punches hard enuff to kill teknik's....you had gd ideas on there...i liked the whole uhhh space issues..but u guess u didnt use enuff creativity to bang on teknik..and u gatta work a lil more on ur flow and structure...then u'd be better...


vote HONESTLY on mine too...cos i did the same here...


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