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Old 06-08-06, 09:07 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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k here i am returing favor.......

your going too fast for the beat, simple bass beat needs simple sentence form....it makes you sound weird....never really incooperated midas....i unno, vocals up a lil, i unno....my speakers are crazy....not too bad tho....just make your flow fit the beat more ya know?
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dad said, son you're fucking high
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so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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