Beatin me? Bitch please, you’re just like lingerie in thought
Hoes FINALLY put you on.....just for you to get taken off
Stop with the bull shit, talkin bout makin dollas n shit
Sayin he gonna jump off.........n we all hope it’s a cliff

VS.

on ya myspace. see a pic of ya girl, its cool u happy wit the girl u found.
but DAMN!!, her mustache is more darker than ya myspace background.
this kid is too wack. so stop postin fam, u bringin this league rep down.
nobody can Make Veli Train, if they could, he'll be betta than he is now.


Both of you dropped some weak bullshit. I was nice enough to quote something though, but the bars I did quote were still a bit 'eh'. You both could do a lot better, most the concepts were old.. there were no decent flips on them and to me it is like Maks dropped an "I can't be fucked with anything" kind of verse. Yung Impression... you had a couple of nice concepts... although your wording threw me off a lot. You really do need to work on that because even though they don't come across as stretched bars from a glance... the bars in this battle, and last week and in the cypher.. when I read them a lot of them I always end up thinking "this just sounds choppy to fuck"... it may just be me of course.

Anyway, overall Maks had a better verse so....

V/ - Makeveli Trained

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