Voted For: I Am Unreal.

vote goes to Unreal... both had nice, unique interpretations, but Lucky fell off on the last stanza... u completely lost it... it was too... it's hard to explain... it was too song-ish, and lost reality... sorta reminded me of Jadakiss's flow, but u lost it when it was more about rhyming, and less about the story... both were good, keep writing... 1...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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