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Old 06-09-06, 06:28 PM   #23
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Voted For: Mimesis

Chris sucks and I don't. . so you best believe you'll get left dead, kid
There wouldn't be a Shining thing in your verse if Jack Nicholoson read it
Readers expect shit, you still astound them. . sound the alarms quick
Cause when voters say Jesus, Christ. .
. .is cause they weren't even expecting that amount of garbage
Back down. . you ain't a fucking savior. . so I'm keep ripping this fag
This'll only be the second coming of Christ cause that's where he's finishing at
Shouldn't have come. . I'll throw punches till this guy is dead n'. .
. .I'm just known for burying more Tyl than the bombers of 9-11
I'll keep exposing your wack ass until when you post. . nothing's read
Then make this Lez,bo enough to shoot apples off anybody's fucking head
You aren't respected. . no matter how you put it, you'll still lose guy
So I'll keep cutting Rist's. . with the hope that you finally commit suicide
Save the site, with a blade in sight I'll take your life. . I drop pests
By bringing one punchline and nameplays. .
. .and still leaving my opponents flawlessed

vs.

absolutly nothing

Chris u need to elevate dramatically dawg...mims verse started falling off halfway but the first few lines were enough to do ur 4 bars in easy....u got skillz but u need to become more of a battle rapper on this site...no beef dawg...

my vote goes to Mimesis

could one of u return the favor in one if not all of the battles below wit an honest and fair vote...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227954
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228394
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492

thanks...I apreciate it...
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