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Old 06-10-06, 02:26 AM   #19
Ca'lam
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beat straight west coast


first dude - i like his flow a lilbit. slurrin your rhymin words a lil bit.

chorus - eh - its aight

Tito - When you came in, you come in good. adlibs is real real nice. like the rhyme scheme. best verse on track.

third verse - eh, your flow is shaky. rhymin words arent really getting my head bobbin you know ? just work on the flow of your verse. you'll be straight.

over all an aight track. chorus lyrically was bringin it down a lil bit. but aight drop. 5'sh/10
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