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Old 06-11-06, 12:05 AM   #6
Jay Rose
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the just want you to....threw it off.....

just you move it woulda fit better i think....you had ONE extra syllable in there.....i like it for a club song tho....you need to do come club..."ohh's" or some hype shit in the backround...but yea songwise it wasnt bad at all
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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