ok ok ok
cho your flow is good, for the most part it is. your dubs are off though man. one thing I noticed you hardly dissed anyone, you babbled on to much man. Get more lyrical and diss some faggots man, make it really mean somin.

the hook was really pathetic, no offense but it didn't make sense. "your not rv" wtf does that mean? and it was off snare in the 2nd hook.

tito man, your voice is mad ill, but you didn't diss anyone, I'd expect you to diss me but you didn't. You had nothin but g-unit type lyrics, like nothin was goin around lyrically.

last cat, not bad but as well nothin goin on lyrically, no punches. Not many people mentioned either.

-BP

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