View Single Post
Old 06-12-06, 01:14 AM   #10
M&rk
10:23 till i'm 86
 
M&rk's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,136
From: Michigan
IP:

Voted For: Apostrophe

Shaking the rust off, slut show me some love..
you havent had a fresh bar, since u cleaned the local pub
You're a whore a cunt a skank, and I can bet..
You get fucked soo much, your feet have never met.
..vs.
nothing

Y.. yo u aint have an ounce of punch in ya whole verse.. aint any wordplay or anything witty... u tried a few personals, but its gatta be a punch wit some wordplay... idk what to say.
apo...
that tubes tied line was worded odd... and why would u want a dudes lip stick to ya dick?... anway still a few good bars.. how u get back into this and get in the lbl.. anyway u know my vote...pzz
return the fav on my battle vs. mc phil in front lines
__________________


Big Pic- Whore of the World ( youtube video)


Jesus saves, even from paranoia

myspace.com/marktimothyschafer
my reverbnation.com page
Send a message via AIM to M&rk Send a message via MSN to M&rk