pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: Apostrophe
damn... has to be the worst battle i seen in a minute... i'm mad at apostrophe's color of text, cuz it took me an entire .763 secinds to highlight and read... Yvonne... no good punches... they were all weak... A... not much better.... last line saved u... the only decent line in the entire battle... step ur games up and keep battlin... and vonne, try not to over complicate ur punches... a couple looked nice, but were too long, and didn't flow right...
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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